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Call me Dee's avatar

I really like how you break down the poem in the afterwords. It provides the author’s perspective which readers normally assume. I think that’s pretty cool.

The Speechless Poet's avatar

Thank you much. I try to share my overall process to enhance the experience.

JJ's avatar

Broken down like you are inside me. Thank you.

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Thank you for reading and for taking time to comment

Nova Solace's avatar

Another amazing piece, as others have stated you do a phenomenal job at breaking your lines down I appreciate that as a reader. Adds another layer of context. Very Interesting perspective, the other side of a kept secret isn’t shown often. Once again you have a way with words and I will continue to applaud you for that.

The Speechless Poet's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words and continued support.

Denise Jackson's avatar

My my my. If we’re honest, we’ve probably been in the desired position one way or another throughout different stages of our lives. I know I have. Not a proud moment, but a true moment that flourishes into something out of the darkness into the light or disintegrates in the heat of the shadows.

I had to pick my face up but, thank you for this. Looking forward for more.

The Speechless Poet's avatar

I think more of us have been here than we’d like to admit. But we live and we learn. Thank you for reading and for your comment.